>tags says translated
>not translated yet
I'll be back in five minutes.

Sorry, that's tagging laziness, all i did was copy pasting the tags ;_;

Smiling Patchy in last two panels gives me hope.

Which can only mean dora e is about to troll us even harder!

Meh I hate my dodgy translations.

Really gotta work on my japanese more.

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yendi0 said:
It looks fine to me.

Also, if Patchy dies or something, I will hate everything forever.

It's just that when i read it in japanese, and when i read my translation, it always feels like something is missing yet i just can't tell what it is.

Nials said:
It's just that when i read it in japanese, and when i read my translation, it always feels like something is missing yet i just can't tell what it is.

I really can't help you with the translation bit - for all I know Koa is explaining why she thinks new york style pizza is much better than chicago - but your phrasing into English seems fine.

Last pages koa is really struggling with her "sorry"
Love it

I wonder if that's a Kazami Yuuka-ish smile Patchy has. Or maybe she's just happy Koakuma is finally being honest.