This doujin is tits! Maybe graphics was sometimes weird. Maybe sometimes plot was just "meh" and kicked all your canon out of window. But what it keep hooked up is details: faces (unique for each character and you can say who's who without looking at zun-hat), refences (other media and real world), speech (for example Mokou's formal speech) etc - it's all makes this doujin standing out.
Thanks and internets goes to Stan-Miller for sharing and translating this stuff.
Hardest thing I've ever translated. Full of phrases and words and reference I've never seen before. Expect there will be a lot of translations need to be fix in this one. I should do this again soon. Least the next one is better looking.
I'm still totally and utterly lost on a lot of what happened though. The storyline and setting seemed all over the place where it was hard to keep up.
Yeah I had that feeling too, especially at the part where Marisa punched Reimu in the face for running off on her own, I was like "The hell, Marisa?! Weren't you going batshit insane trying to rescue her?!"
Marisakari made up for it though...
I also found it amusing how when the Hakurei barrier was dissipating, Yukari just came in and HAXSIGN!'d everything.
