oosaki minato and minato aya (original) drawn by niichi_(komorebi-palette)

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    いつか、淡色の空の下 1-3話 『ミズモリじゃありません』

    ＜前回までのあらすじ＞
    手をつかんだら逃げられた。
    ＜今回のあらすじ＞
    水杜さんとなんかいちゃついてる。

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    HaxtonFale
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    Rather than "letters," perhaps it's better to use "characters" so I changed it. The last panel, though, might work even better if you phrased it in terms of "spelling" (of the name), but I'll leave that decision to someone more confident in their English.

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