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  • ID: 2960352
  • Uploader: enty73 »
  • Date: over 7 years ago
  • Approver: PhoenixG »
  • Size: 247 KB .jpg (785x1300) »
  • Source: twitter.com/idonum/status/943038603344482304 »
  • Rating: General
  • Score: 7
  • Favorites: 12
  • Status: Active

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post #2896575
wo-class aircraft carrier, yuubari, graf zeppelin, seaport princess, re-class battleship, and 1 more (kantai collection) drawn by ido_(teketeke)

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    enty73
    over 7 years ago
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    Type-set translation by idonum.

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    laisy
    over 7 years ago
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    Translation taken from Danbooru. Oh, yes

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    Rukaroa
    over 7 years ago
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    Ido, you glorious lurker.

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    Paracite
    over 7 years ago
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    He's already asked me if he can use my translations, too! And even put another one up today!

    Guess I'll have to say something when I get his new doujin at Comiket...

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    over 7 years ago
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    Pemano
    over 7 years ago
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    To be honest though, the typeset is horrible if you ask me

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    KyteM
    over 7 years ago
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    It's very different to typeset English to Japanese, and even harder to fit English in Japanese text boxes.

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    Pemano
    over 7 years ago
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    It's easy with this kind of bubble though
    And you don't have to give each word its own line because that's not how typing works since you're typing in English, not Japanese, and that typeset above failed even the most basic thing in typesetting

    Updated by Pemano over 7 years ago

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    Pemano
    over 7 years ago
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    See? Much better right?

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    rom collector
    over 7 years ago
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    I think you only got the first bubble right. The rest is either too stylized, stretched, small or thin to be comfortably readable. Dialog boxes are supposed to be consistent in font and size at least between the same character dialogues.

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    Pemano
    over 7 years ago
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    rom_collector said:

    I think you only got the first bubble right. The rest is either too stylized, stretched, small or thin to be comfortably readable. Dialog boxes are supposed to be consistent in font and size at least between the same character dialogues.

    That's why I've enlarged it a bit and used the largest font size possible so you can zoom in and read just fine, and dialog boxes are NEVER supposed to be consistent in font and size, they have to be stylized to fully express the emotions in it, that's the most basic in typesetting
    And if you want to prove me wrong, then name a decent artist/ typesetter that uses only 1 font and 1 size to type the dialogues on his works

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    rom collector
    over 7 years ago
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    I see you don't check that many webcomics or printed comics, it's the basic norm. You can practically check the wikipedia page about comics/webcomics and check the examples by yourself. Or maybe you're confusing it with sound effects, totally unrelated to dialog boxes.

    With that said stylizing comics is a freestyle form, yet you shouldn't tell your readers "here is the worst size readable font that does look cool, be sure to bring in a magnifier to read it".

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    Pemano
    over 7 years ago
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    No, not only the sound effects but the dialogues are never supposed to be typed in a single font, like normal talking and angry talking, they're never in the same font if the typesetter really knows how to type, many typesetters don't have a collection of fonts just for nothing
    And the reason why my typing looks small to you is because that is the almost largest size possible without ruining that kind of speech bubble
    Not sure if you read it on the phone or not but you can read it just read it in the original resolution
    And this still does not change the fact that the page above is just like a copy then slap the translation on the page then save it, at least you have to arrange it right

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    UrBoiTom
    over 7 years ago
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    Disapointingly poor effort into applying the most basics of norm of text-positioning into practice.
    Clarifications are rather unecessary since how bad it looks is apparently crystal-clear anyway.

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    Pemano
    over 7 years ago
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    Knowing the fact this maybe Ido's attempt to get closer to his fans make me feel bad now

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    Claverhouse
    over 7 years ago
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    Whatever: I'm just grateful for this, which is far superior to painfully hovering each bubble.

    Thanks be to Ido !

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    NWSiaCB
    over 7 years ago
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    Claverhouse said:

    Whatever: I'm just grateful for this, which is far superior to painfully hovering each bubble.

    Thanks be to Ido !

    Funny, I rather enjoy the mouse-overing, especially since it keeps me from accidentally reading a bubble out of order, and find those that don't keep the original text to be highly annoying...

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