translation please T.T

Can someone check my translation? Especially the surname on the letter.

shiroikaze said:
Can someone check my translation? Especially the surname on the letter.

Checked and corrected some things.

And, the name is correct.

Gaooo said:
Checked and corrected some things.

And, the name is correct.

Thanks alot.

Lol. Len reading doraemon.