"はい?" doesn't translate to "Yes?" in this context. It should mean something along the lines of "Pardon?", "What?", or simply "Eh?", the last of which is what I went with in my amendment of the note.
Okay, here you go!Today, I'm getting a new and powerful plane deployed!1Draw Manga "Zuihou"! ①You need to make it yourself, the first time.Eh?Please hurry!I'm super looking forward to it!I couldn't wait any longer!Oh my, Zuihou. You sure are early, aren't you?REPPUU
