Maybe i'm reading this long, but this seems like it's supposed to be a repeat of

post #2090117
post #2090120

Except with a different second post?

The pool makes it appear that post #2090120 was written out entirely for this version. Was it a revision?

JS2057 said:

Maybe i'm reading this long, but this seems like it's supposed to be a repeat of

post #2090117
post #2090120

Except with a different second post?

The pool makes it appear that post #2090120 was written out entirely for this version. Was it a revision?

As the author said in his commentary, he couldn't think about what to write in that blank space at the time he first posted that story. This version is a revised one he made after starting the "In this town, I dream" manga.