Pixiv version ends here. The actual doujin (comparing my own physical copy) seems to have these bonus pages which are also uploaded by Smity. Guess we'll keep those and eject all childs from the pool?

Done re-positioning all the notes and check translations where needed
_(:3」∠)_

Vezral said:

Done re-positioning all the notes and check translations where needed
_(:3」∠)_

Dang man, I just woke up! Couldn't thank you more. And, uh, sorry for not labeling my check translations clearly this time as well.